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Tyv-maleri

Postby Bjørn » Fri Jul 19, 2013 8:59 am

Hvad skal jeg gøre, jeg er gået lidt i stå på dette punkt.

Critique the shizhnats out of this!

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Re: Tyv-maleri

Postby Christoffer Andersen » Tue Jul 23, 2013 8:43 pm

Manden i blå's hovede, virker ret detached fra kroppen. Tror det er vinklen på hovedet som er meget lodret. Den ville jeg nok tilte lidt mere. Og så savner jeg lidt konstruktion i hans ansigt. Det virker lidt fladt.
Hans trøje er enormt rynket. Tror du ville slippe bedre afsted med nogle få, velvaglte omkring maven, og ikke så mange omkring kraven.

Evt. hop i en lign. trøje, stil dig i den pose du vil have, og se hvordan den folder. Så kan du i den forbindelse også se, hvordan hovedet skal tiltes :)


I forhold til slangemanden, så synes jeg det kunne være fedt, hvis der var lidt mere vægt i ham. Han ligget meget lige op af væggen.
Måske han tilter lidt mere til screen left, og på den måde aktiverer hans screen left arm lidt, som pt. hænge lidt fladt og lige.

Og så lige til sidst i forhold til kontrast, kan du godt give den mere knald i forgrunden, og den væg som slangemanden ligger op ad.

Håber det var lidt hjælp?

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Re: Tyv-maleri

Postby Bjørn » Sat Jul 27, 2013 10:53 am

Ja, tak for feedback,

God ide med trøjen, reference er nu altid godt.

Jeg ser på det!
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